tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-984654218662631050.post6093209951144209119..comments2023-11-03T03:17:53.623-07:00Comments on Micah Barta: Project #3 Review 2 Friday Progress (Ending)Micah Keoha Bartahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12508800453994735748noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-984654218662631050.post-74488353809891776782009-11-20T15:38:52.065-08:002009-11-20T15:38:52.065-08:00the man icon is fun - original with personality. n...the man icon is fun - original with personality. needs refinement though on the angle pose. the knot also is good. overall icons need to match formally - so keep line weight and space consistent.<br /><br />the mail icon is a bit generic and the eye is not communicating. in fact, I know what the model is and I don't know what that signifies! <br /><br />this model, however is not as clear or formally as resolved as your other one posted below with text. <br /><br />watch that justified text (rivers and hyphens). <br /><br />why those stars? be critical of the connotations of that form. stars in the row can reference a user review rating system (like on amazon). and It can be a bit patriotic too. I understand your government issue approach - but the stars seem misguided.jamiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10368045695667600986noreply@blogger.com